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I kept all of my attention on those last rays of light. say instead, I kept my attention focused on those last rays. I unclenched one of my hands and ...

In complete disbelief, Robert sat motionlessly in the driver seat. As his fingers grazed the cold glass, he instantaneously became sober and realized what had just happened. -- i don't ...

Psssst!!! I suggest you start from the beginning. It'll make things alot less confusing! Chapter One Chapter Two _______________________________________________________________________ The inside was

1 I stared out the chambers window contemplating what I had just heard, watching the sun paint the sky a ravishing red-gold, as the guard went on babbling the non-sense ...

Hot, humid air produced perspiration on her back as she worked. Birds cawed lamely and her German Shepherd panted weakly in the shade of the old oak. -- lots of ...

Been a while since the last part of my chapter. Sorry about that. Check out the rest of them, and all critiques are welcome! Enjoy. - The Heracia’s are back ...

I watched the sun rise over the trench. Gorgeous rays of red tinted with orange. It looked like spilled watercolour on wet golden paper. Creases folded where the paint ran ...

Then Mr. Acorn walked slowly to the door. He pulled it open. A faun was standing at the door. -- okay i suggest saying Mr. Acorn walked slowly to the ...

hey just a few suggestions to add. I too didn't read your previous chapters but this is really good. Try to fit the dialogue of what's going on in her ...