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The Heracia’s are back in town.
What was she going to do? She couldn’t back out now; Frank had just e-mailed her the details and even Phillip had patted her shoulder in a proud way as he had passed.
Her eyes were fixed between the blank spaces of the Times New Roman text, trying to imagine that what she was seeing was not there and what she had heard was just a joke; a cruel joke.
Not that anyone else knew how she had lived all those lifetimes ago; she hid that in her own little Pandora’s Box and the lock never strained. She swallowed back her panic and released a little sigh, which sounded more like a whimper. The fact that they still scared her senseless made her skin crawl. She kicked off her shoes beneath the desk and closed her eyes, pressing the heels of her hands against the lids and resting her elbows on the edge of her desk.
Her computer whirred sympathetically beside her as the office was in full flow, everyone trying to meet their latest deadline to avoid the wrath of their editor. She drifted off into her own thoughts with a soft sigh, her back relaxing slightly against the rest of her chair.
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“I’m not doing this anymore.” She stated in her cool voice which was suddenly beginning to seem a lot gentler than usual. She stood in the doorway of the lounge, her eyes dull as she pressed her lips together slightly. The portly man sat in his recliner, eyes closed as the TV blared into the room.
The lounge flickered with colour and sound from the television set, casting shadows over the minimalist décor with its inset bookcase alcoves. The white panelled flooring was unscathed and the pale blue walls clashed with the black furniture. Definitely not the kind of arrangement she had expected from a line of high class thugs.
“I see your hormones are tugging at you again, Paige.” He chuckled to himself, pressing back against the cushions of the chair with a groan of relaxation.
Paige strode into the room, her eyes becoming sharp once more as she zoned in on the man, Henry Heracio. His tie had been loosened, along with his top few shirt buttons and his dress shoes lay discarded beside the chair. Her cheeks were a red that had never been present before; a guilt red.
“You never told me he had a kid.” She snapped.
“You never asked,” Henry replied smoothly, opening his eyes now and looking at her with a slight smile. “It’s never bothered you before.”
“That’s because the kids were always out the way. You got me after him on the school run!” Her voice rose as she became exasperated, the colour in her cheeks rising with it.
Henry’s smile stopped at this, his eyes becoming colder than the snow that was beginning to land on his window sill. He stood and straightened his tie, clearing his throat as he bent to pick up his shoes. Paige was tensed, ready for some sort of retaliation blow.
“I hope you’re not backing out Paige. I’d hate to lose you.” He fixed her gaze to hers and took her hand, squeezing it affectionately, but going a little further so that Paige could feel the bones crackling together. She grimaced.
“Dinner is at five. Perhaps then you could share your concerns with the rest of the boys, yes?” He kissed her cheek and released her hand, walking from the room with relaxed ease.
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“Paige? Hey, you okay?” A hand shook her shoulder and Paige started, removing her hands fro her eyes as she blinked dazedly to the hand, which belonged to Phillip.
“Huh?”
“Look, go home. You’ve been all over the place for the whole day, and I’m sick of looking at you moping around.” He held her coat out to her.
“Oh. Alright,” she replied mistily, standing and draping her coat around her shoulders.
“You can take that proofreading home to finish.” He remarked, walking back to his office.
Great, she thought.
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