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Re: Antimatter
interesting viewpoint, even though i COMPLETELY disagree. but i found this interesting... i love hearing peoples opinions- everyone should spew out more of that. the reason i disagree with this ...
Tue Aug 28, 2012 8:31 am -
Re: and the lone girl in rome
its a pretty good poem, and i must say i like the line " the eyes, like lanterns in the night, shall lead me somewhere brighter." however, i did not ...
Tue Aug 28, 2012 8:24 am -
Re: Your eyes...
good call on the last line.... eye crinkles are very endearing. but... are the eyes blue or hazelish(sandy) im a little unclear on that but otherwise this is a very ...
Tue Aug 28, 2012 8:15 am -
Re: [In]Sane
i thought this a good poem because it reminded me of school. memories sneak up on me... of elementary, when i loved each day that i could get up and ...
Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:49 am -
Re: Down
hmmm.... she's insane, i suppose... but maybe you dont know yourself. i do that sometimes. or is this about suicide? it is pretty discombobulating.
Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:39 am -
Re: one who cant read one's muse
absolutely OUTSTANDING. first, great title- really pulled me in. second, creativity, in my opinion, is what makes an awesome writing, and this- this is colossally, immensely, vastly, awe-inspiringly c
Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:30 am
