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Yes, that would be quite interesting. To talk about depression and certain mental illnesses from the adolescents' perspective!!

Oops, I forgot to add: Don't end the article with a quote! You want to leave the reader with your, the writer's, opinion!

Haha, the reason why I put this poem under 16 for mature content, would be because people under this age would not understand this poem. I agree with putting a ...

thank you! and yes, the break was intentional. :)

thanks!!!!

No problem! Hope you found it helpful. :)

These two lines are awesome: "Pieces of you intertwined with my soul,/ And now, my deserted soul aches." I would keep combing through the poem and revising it until all ...

Using social media sites like tumblr would definately get you out on the market. Message me if you would like to talk to some people who have published their own ...

are you thinking of publishing your poems? I would really buy the collaboration. Look into it!

fortis I don't have time to review this, but I really wanted to commend you on the writer you've become. Simply amazing.

AHHHHH THIS IS THE BEST REVIEW EVERRRRRRRR! Thank you! I am so flattered!

Thank you so much! I knew the ending was a little off, I just couldn't pin exactly what was wrong with it. I'd like more insight as in how to ...

Thank you!

Thank you so much for your review! The first few paragraphs were supposed to describe her personality. Although I haven't thought it out clearly, I think my character suffers from ...

Thanks, your suggestions make a lot of sense! Can't wait to revise it now. Thank you!