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Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
Thanks haha! :)
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: The Edge of Death
:)
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: t5
:) Np! I'll get to work on ch 4 ;)
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
Yeah, I agree. I'll make the changes!
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
And I reviewed it :)
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
Haha! And thanks! :) I'll post the next chapter as soon as I finish! Expect to see it this weekend!
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
IKR! Did you find any nitpicks?
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
Haha. And yeah I love BOL. :)
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
I updated it! Reread it! :)
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
Cool! Here's a hint - I've already written the next two chapters. And just FYI, the first chapter is intentionally misleading about, you know, what will happen in her love ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
I agree with most of your feedback, this was an awesome review, and I'll have to change a few things later when I get the chance. However, I have to ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
Haha! Yeah, I'm 12. And I TOTALLY get your nitpickiness - it was just some free writing I've been doing, so in other words, it kinda sucks :P Thanks tho! ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: x
;)
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: x
That was so good! I know this will sound totally cray-cray to the max, but I found no mistakes or nitpicks!! Nice work! Highest Regards, -Your personal editor ( um, ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Crushes Can Crush You
Crushes always fail. :-|
Oct 1, 2014