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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Crazy Little Thing I

    That was great, very well written for a young adult story. I would love to read the rest, or the entire story if you have it somewhere =]]] The part ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: 'Veggies'

    This essay, or rather story is surprisingly amusing. I began reading it, expecting nothing due to the title 'veggies,' but I was hooked from the beginning. It was hilarious, I ...

    Jul 21, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Manatees

    That was a lovely, formally written essay that I enjoyed. It held lots of information about the Manatee, including historical facts which I've always found interesting and your statement was ...

    Jul 21, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Attractions

    It's interesting, pretty good so far. The dialogue is well put, makes sense, but the only problem (for me) is the lack of descriptions. Such as in this particular part: ...

    Jul 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Suicide

    Impressive. Expresses lots of emotion, almost to a point where you can feel it - due to the descriptions. Great use of words and vivid vocabulary. It may be short, ...

    Jul 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lonely

    For your first poem - I'm impressed. It flowed pretty well, the ending was a bit too abrupt for me but, you have plenty of time to learn the art ...

    Jul 21, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    Every time I read the series, I swear it's like a poison. I'm so intoxicated with everything about Twilight to a point where I relate everything in my life with ...

    Jul 20, 2008


Memories, left untranslated, can be disowned; memories untranslatable can become someone else’s story.
— YiYun Li