sarahjane97

Hi TazmaniaGirl! Sarah here to review. :) Contrary to what purplellamas37 said, I don't think this is "not good, not good." Gauranteed, it isn't PERFECT, but nothing is. There's always ...

Hello! Sarah here to review! :) Okay, nice start. I like the description you give in the beginning with the tear-stained face and puffy red eyes. It makes me wonder ...

Hi Michael! This is so simple, so beautiful, and so open ended. I love how anyone could read this and interpret it in their own way-- it makes it easier ...

Hello! Sarah here to review! :) I liked this poem. It was pretty short, but carried enough emotion in it to fill up a whole page. I also congradulate you ...

Hi again, Michael! As the fifth reviewer, everything that could be improved on has already been pointed out (show not tell, yadayadayada) Haha, I have trouble with showing not telling ...

Hi Michael! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing your new(ish) stuff. Stupid finals. -_-' Anyhow, here's what I think of the poem: I like this ...

Hi Michael! I hope you're ready for a boatload of compliments, 'cause here they come... I really like the pace of the book so far. Since I'm writing a novel ...

Hi Michael! I usually have something to critique in every story, but for once I've got nothing. This was just amazing, and all I can say is write more! The ...

Hey Michael! Again, your poetry continues to astound me. I like how this poem teeters on the edge of confusion and really makes you stop and think. Good job! Also, ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. When I first read the title, I was expecting a morally wrong narrator that was...well...a liar. But when I read the poem and realize ...

Hello! I'm Sarah and I'll be reviewing your work today! :) First of all, I read the first chapter and you've got a very interesting concept here. It's a bit ...

Wow. I am dumbstruck. That was so tragic and beautiful. This nearly made me cry... I loved how you used the perspective of a young child here. The simple, innocent, ...

I understood this poem up until the last stanza. Is the narrator of this poem a guy, and that's why he can't date his straight best friend? If that's correct, ...

Wow, I am literally in love with this. I'm a Harry Potter fanatic, but I don't take it too seriously. It was hilarious to see Harry acting...well...not like Harry. As ...

This was really good! The only nitpick I had was this: Your eye s travel along the keyboard, eye ing up the letters, as if expecting a word to hit ...