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Re: Family
wow this really made me think Honestly, I don't know how to answer all the question this piece posed for me But, to me, "poetically" I feel as though that's ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: To Mind Your Mind
Hey! Ofcourse theres a few grammatical errors but you said this was your first piece so who cares! :) haha I really love how at the "Lies" line the whole ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: How I Found Color
I found this piece extremely interesting. I actually read it over about 10 times just thinking about each stanza haha If I could ask a question to you it'd be, ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Fishbowl.
Hey! I'm back on this site again after a little time off but I'm hoping you appreciate my comments :) I looooovvvveee short works like these. So precise, and meaningful ...
Jan 29, 2014
