sapphirewednesday

The grammar used isn't great. The detail isn't great. I'm all for short and sweet poems, as long as they're to the point. Sometimes the length you chose works, but ...

Nice! I like the imagery, though it seems to wind and spiral a bit. Then there's the rhyming which I don't understand if it's supposed to rhyme or not. I ...

I didn't like it much. It didn't flow well and seemed very rectangular. What I mean is, it seemed that instead of trying to get your point across, you were ...

Really really long. I don't know that the longest poems are the best. When they start getting that long I think it's best to wright a short story. Honestly, I ...

This is great! I was really captivated by all the imagery used in each line, then I got to the end and I was like OMG I DO THAT!!! Really ...

I really liked this poem! Poems like this take a topic that is very intense and sad, and almost made light of it by pointing out the narrators flaws. My ...

Reading through some of your work. The poetry mostly, seeing as I'm not in a story mood. This poem dragged me in and used the imagery that I needed to ...

HessicaJolt, this was a very good poem. I feel like in some areas it could be a bit more detailed, or with a bit more flow. The only way to ...

This is beautiful! :D I like the fact that you rhyme sometimes and then get off the rhyme, and I like that it's not like most poems which talk about ...

I honestly wasn't crazy about this poem. I don't like much how you speak so casually. I feel as if you're almost just talking, having a conversation. If you edit ...

I like it in the way that it describes a very relatable feeling. However, I don't like the unnecessary punctuation and changing the lines more than necessary. Other than that ...