sapphireluna

Hi! There are actually two people writing this story, and I am the other writer who hasn't replied yet. Thank you so much for giving advice on our novel, it ...

Sorry I just realized I submitted my review twice! I appologise. LOL XXX, Sapphireluna

Hello! This was a pretty good short story with an interesting plot twist I didn't see coming. However, there could be some improvements so I'm going to get right into ...

So I already wrote my review, but I wanted to thank you for replying like this because you make a very good point. A lot of times, writers take excerpts ...

WOW. I don't really know what to say, so I'll just say this: This is an extremy strong piece that portrays a lot of emotion and feeling and deep, deep ...

Don't be sorry! Let me offer you some free advice. (Hamilton references. LOL) Never apologize when your getting constructive criticism. Stand up for your work, for you choices, and stick ...

Thank you!!! I really appreciate that. I will add those extra descriptions-that is something that is really important to me in writing and I always appreciate ways to improve mine. ...

Oh my gosh thank you so much for reviewing! I didn't really think about that pebble thing.... so I'll have to get back to you on that. (I promise I ...

Of course! I look foward seeing more pieces by you in the future.

Can you explain to me whos talking?