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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Stains

    Thanks so much for your review, I see what you're saying, I found it very helpful!

    Jul 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Stains

    I wrote this when I was in one of my depressed moods, therefore, there wasn't too much effort put forth, I was simply writing what was on my mind. Awhile ...

    Jul 14, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Just Upload!

    I love this! this is exactly how I feelscrolling through this site and others, cuz I'm all out of stuff to read! I love how humorous this is, and is ...

    Jul 14, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Reminiscence (Prologue)

    Thank you for your feedback! I went back and fixed those couple typos, thank you so much for point them out, I always appreciate criticism especially cuz this is my ...

    Jul 12, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Petal by Petal

    I had the same thought about the parents squabble, so I decided that it showed a lot of underlying tension between the parents. It was a short story I wrote ...

    Jul 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Waiting

    It's actually about my life, but thanks for your concern, I did read through your comment, and I did find reassurance in it, thank you

    Jul 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: No Darkness Can Beat The Cloud

    I absolutely love this, great sense of humor and I love how I know exactly what's going on despite it being primarily dialogue. I will definitely have to go through ...

    Jul 9, 2019


it's ok, death by laughter was always how i've wanted to go out
— Carina