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thank you for reviewing my work :} I'm happy to know you found it intriguing!

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thank you vv much !! I am sadly not well versed in romance... quite at all, in fact, but I'm glad it gave off the impression of what I was ...

that's true... feelings are messy sometimes xd :]}

Title suggestion for the piece: The Riverbed of the Dead

thank you for your feedback!! hint: the ending relates to the legend :}

thank you for your feedback!! I had the same worry with the mystery aspect of things... I'll keep that in mind for the future. ~ I actually originally had Arius' ...

*(village decimation & blood crate & proposal)

thank you for the pointers! ~ I can see how the ending may come off abrupt... I was going for a more fast-paced climax in revealing the true 'mystery' behind ...

This story was for a 350-word-limit challenge, with the genre being mYstEry~

Thank you very much for your insight :} Yes~! I found it very helpful! You've described my character's burdens marvellously :] and your mention of trauma, depression and addiction-- having ...

Thank you for reviewing my piece! I will most certainly keep your advice in mind :} ~ I didn't realise I'd overused my placement of emphasis in italicising things along ...