sachipachi1

There were some parts of the poem where the wording was a bit off, but overall, the poem was great

This was a very impressive poem, though you could use some different vocabulary, just broaden your vocabulary a bit and the poem would be great

This poem was very good! I really liked the flow of the poem and the creativity in your words! Good Job!

Wow, I love it! Your poem is beautiful and I can totally visualize your poem in my head whenever i read it!

This poem is very deep and reaches out to the reader... it just has a few punctuation errors, but besides that it was really good

This is a great poem! I can feel the depth in it -sachipachi1

This piece was excellent, I can really relate to it The wording was a bit off, but still, good job -sachipachi1