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  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: a girl filled with wanderlust

    Hello! I’m Saby and I’m here to review your work. You don’t know how much I love Rapunzel of Disney’s Tangled. The way the creators mold her to be an ...

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Name Carver.

    Wow. I like the way you order the events chronologically, piling up the clues like some foreshadowing, to reveal the last stanza in the poem. But I think that the ...

    Feb 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The World Within

    It's amazing that you can write a poem with scientific concepts in it. It's my dream to write one so congrats that you are able to pull this off. The ...

    Feb 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: They call me obsessed... The Ballet

    Hi! I'm surprise at the ending of your story. I didn't think it would end this way but I liked it. It gave the charm on your story even if ...

    Oct 14, 2015


it's ok, death by laughter was always how i've wanted to go out
— Carina