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actually I just asked my little sister what to write about, she is 3, and she said a pig. :)

HI IGGY! This work is amazing! I love how you used such a broad vocabulary. I couldn't stop reading it. It really pulls in the reader. I want to know ...

Thanks my little brother and sister wanted to help me write so I let them help me :)

Sabrina here XD I loved this piece, I am bisexual myself and I know what its like to be judged by society. It's very horrible how people are so judgmental. ...

I loved it, its really a quit romantic little poem until she say she doesn't love him back. good job on the poem

no he is made up and I am already half way done with the second chapter.

I have made corrections, thanks to you. I am going to add more depth and I am going to add to the first chapter,make it longer. Thanks for all the ...

Both are very help full and nether are very harsh. I love criticism, I am also a new writer so please comment away.

Wow I love this it. It has so much feeling and meaning behind it, you can tell in the words and ways you have described it. wtg!