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Re: A Prayer to Allah
Beautifully written poem/prayer. I like the repettion, as well as the learning by unlearning line. However, the Constant repetition of Allah seemed a little passe for me. I dunno, I ...
Mar 28, 2006 -
Re: For You, I'll Speak French
Bob, this piece is excellent. Amazing, even. The way you write your poems leaves me breathless each time I read something you write, I'm jealous. Im wish I could find ...
Feb 26, 2006 -
Re: Wailing Wall
The wall seems to know that it will too fall, as all things do. But even then, in Its destruction, It shall be a monument of hope. I really liked ...
Feb 6, 2006 -
Re: Urban Decay: The Demon War ((Work in Progress))
Well, the idea behind the story is good, but it needs some work. The Demon War was raging non-stop in a forest just outside Titan City, a large underground storage ...
Oct 1, 2005 -
Re: George Bush Fans
Well, even though I have a deep hate for Bush, I thought this one was hilarious. And don't mind Psylynx over here, he just got out of the loony bin. ...
Aug 7, 2005 -
Re: September 11
I was home sick, watching cartoons or something, maybe it was the history channel? It doesn't really matter. Then my mom called from work and said "Danny, turn on the ...
Aug 5, 2005 -
Re: Behind Coffee Colored Lashes
This is really quite lovely, and really very good. I really like the imagery. The character kinda reminds me of myself a little bit---a dreamer, a romantic, who never completely ...
Jul 22, 2005 -
Re: gâteau de marbre
Well, I really don't understand the poem at all-- 1. My french is really bad and 2. its really not clear...its consitently unclear, actually. All the repetition of "its..." makes ...
Jun 11, 2005
