ryleigha

Hi there! This is a really good poem! I think that almost everyone has had this feeling of being lost in your surroundings. I like the question that you pose ...

This poem was fantastic! I really liked how it seemed almost like an epic. Especially with the story line and the battle that you waged. The only thing that I ...

Hey there! I really liked the adjectives that you used in this to describe Rylan! Just one thing, sun-stricken usually is associated with sun stroke or heat stroke, so it's ...

Hi there! I really liked this poem, and the rhyme scheme you have! Also the rhythm and tone that you have really reinforce the theme of feeling blue. I think ...

Hi there! This was an amazing short! I really liked the mirroring between the three characters and the theme of three that you continued! This is really solid writing, especially ...

Hi there! I find it hard to review poetry because, with all art, the opinion depends on the viewer. I really like the observation of the human condition especially during ...