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Awwwwww this is so cute! I love love love how you ended it by saying your age! I was like omg! Also, I must admit that i did assume that ...

Wow. That was powerful and i love the ending. Curiosity may have killed the cat, but love killed Callie Miller. i love how you used that. It ties the whole ...

Oh my jellyfis, lmfao daaaaannng! This is the most hilarious one I've read so far. I LOVE your writing style and just wow. Bravo bravo! Since David had the strength ...

"Stephanie, come on!Get out of the car!" Kris yelled. I Turned my face away from the window. He opened the door and pulled me out onto the sidewalk. "K-Kris let ...

Oh my goodness. This story is so so so powerful! I wanted to cry, it's filled with emotion and i can feel how he does. I can see what she ...

Oh my jellyfish! That was really good! I love how you repeated the beginning at the end. There were some grammar mistakes but all in all it was a good ...

Holy Cannoli that was amazing! It was a little short but very emotional and powerful, nonetheless. There could've been more detail, but you don't have to change a thing. Like ...

Well, everything that i saw has already been pointed out so...all i have to say is that was really good and it ended perfectly :) i'd like to read more ...

Omg wow :) that was really good. i love how you described every little detail. and the way you described her made her seem like a goddess. Also, the little ...