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Yeah Im going to work on the form and imagry of this piece for a bit! :) Thanks very much! :D

I was studying it in philosophy and I got onto the mood! Thanks! :)

Thanks very much! :) And will do! :)

Ill try and add a metaphore so! I like the idea of it being an outline! Its back in the workshop at the mo! Thanks very much for the ideas ...

Yeah Im working on that at the mo! I think your ideas are very good, Thanks! :)

Hello repose! :) Thank you! :) Yeah Its gone back to the workshop for a few tweeks at the mo! :) Thanks for the review! :)

Hello! First off thank you! :) yeah Im working on the form and rhythem of the poem at the mo! Your idea of the beginning of a book has got ...

Thank you!

awe Im sorry! I cried while writing it too!

hello! I think I got most of the errors! I'll think about moving it so! Thanks for the review! :)

Hello Repose! I think I got most of the gramatical errors! At "securely vulnerable with you"its an intentional contradiction, I meant it as in when you feel so safe with ...

Thanks for the review! On reading your review i have to day I agree with what you say! Thank you! :)

Thank you!! :D

Thank you very much! :) and you got me in one! :)

First off thank you! I hope the reliving wasnt too painful! Secondly I'll defintely look throught the punctuation! :) Thanks again! :)