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Oh no, no. This is not a worthless story! An edit would be good, yes, and that would help clean it up. But this has potential for great things!

You're welcome! : D Okay. I see why you brought your point across the way you did... I know its probably not the best way to use your Bible when ...

Heya Jim! No, this isn't a review but I thought I would comment. First off, I found this very interesting and to be honest with you, I have had much ...

Welcomes!

Wow. This was so GOOD - it totally summed up a lot of my opinions, though I found it a little strange you said we were all born LGBTQ+. I ...

You're welcome, Basil! I'm so glad my review appeared to be somewhat helpful. Ah, the narrator reminds me of someone in my family... similar struggles and all. Thanks for answering ...

Thanks for the review, KAL! I think I know what sentence you're referring to in the second paragraph (it IS kinda long) but I'm glad you enjoyed it! cheers :)

Thank you for the review, Lupa! I totally see what you mean and thought to myself, this is so unrealistic. But I could hardly help myself - I love to ...

Alright, I see. Thank you! :)

Awwwee! This is SO sad and realistic and relatable and heart-breaking, I don't know what to say! *cries*

You're welcome! ;) I honestly didn't notice the trail mix thing until I went back over the story to see if I'd missed anything. XD

Argh. Sorry I'm responding to this so late - things have been hectic. Thank you. Did you post your poem on here? I'd love to read it...

Thanks for the review, Snaz. Yes, I see what you mean in how I felt and others felt. I was, honestly, disappointed with this a little, but I didn't want ...

Ooo, could you point out the mistakes?? I'd like to perfect this as much as possible. Also, thank you. I appreciate the love. :)

Its true, what you say about Death... Thank you, Feather.