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:) makes sense! Thanks for explaining!

Thank you for explaining! And you're welcome! :)

You did not just say this isn't set on our world. WHATTTTT?? Dude! I would have never guessed. But okay, haha. That's cool. You're welcome. :D

I know, right?! It's like, seriously hard trying to balance all this stuff when you're writing it. xD Do you keep sticky notes or something to help remind you? That ...

You're welcome! :)

Really, that's odd :p that'd be great if you'd make it more poetic; I'd love to see the results :D

Oh, I will! Hey, that's understandable - whenever I'm tired, my stuff turns out pretty strange :P

The setting is great! Thailand, my, my. :D

You're welcome (:

Hmm... I wonder if speech would have evolved into something different, then...? Interesting. Okay, but thanks for the clear up! Oh, by the way, I would like to be updated ...

I'm sorry for the confusion :/ did you add some of her feelings in after this review? Gripping the the bulb even tighter, she prepared for the shield to activate. ...

If you spend too long expounding on it, yes, that is fluff, but I'm talking about little mentions here and there. This is bland without her feeling anything. Do you ...

ah, I see. Thank you for explaining!

thank you for the review! :)

Thank you very much for the helpful review!! I will take your points into consideration :]