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Philosophical! Are you trying to tell us that, even when you add another person to your life, you still feel alone? I actually laughed when I saw it. :) ~Roon

Hello there! Roon here, at your request! I'll start with nitpicks, as before. Little does he know how inexperienced I am. I don't like this line. Maybe he should know. ...

Thank you all! I'm still looking for name advice though? ~ Roon

Thank you one and all! I will make changes as soon as I have a little spare time, it's a little hectic around here right now! ~ Roon

Right, I've made further changes, if there is anything else that needs doing please let me know, but I may not be able to change it very quickly as I ...

Hello, thank you for the reviews, I will make changes, so thank you for your advice, it's always appreciated, thank you all again! ~ Roon

Hello again, sorry this took so long, I’ve been lazy! Nitpicking: He saw some ripe red apples on a tree which had probably grown from a discarded apple core a ...

Roon again! I really liked this bit, excellent work! Nitpicks: until the sun was far down. I think this sounds a little odd, maybe you should mention something about a ...

Hello again, sorry this took so long, small crisis! Two days pass slowly as the festival continues, with minor inconveniences, such as people going missing, bodies turning up You can ...

Roon here! I’m sure you know my routine by now, nitpicks: The city clock tower started to toll for twelve I think you can forget the ‘for’ the small rickety ...

Hello, Roon here, back for more lol! Sorry it took so long, I had to go and eat. Okay, so there are a few nitpicks to get through first: "Cutting ...

Hello, Roon again. Well I’ll leave spelling and grammar because you have a word processor, and I’m English so I will probably get confused, as you say. Anyways, I like ...

Fair enough, I look forward to it!

Wow, thank you for that, I'm honoured that you looked over it so thoroughly, and that you looked at my work! I will take this back to the drawing board, ...

Haha, yes indeed! That is so true, thank you I'll try to think of an alternative! That made me laugh thanks!