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Hello again, Roon here! So I’m onto chapter 2, which has also proved a nice read! Again with the nitpicking I’m afraid though. Here goes, but again, I really did ...

Hello, Roon here! Well, first off, I think this is a nice idea, there is a lot of potential! Your main character is likeable, and easy to identify with. A ...

Hello, I’m Roon, I really liked your poem, I thought it flowed really well, and the message was put across really well. A few nitpicks though: From silent darkness a ...

Wow, first off, this is beautiful! Just a little bit of nitpicking though: With too much Or too little Attention, Should have a comma in there as such: With too ...

This was touching, it's sad that this happened to your friend. i think all grammatical errors have been pointed out. It must have been awful for you to lose a ...

This is fantastic! I really like this. It’s powerful and the imagery you use is perfect. My favourite line is Clouds eternal to play, It's a great line! It fits ...

Hello, and thank you for the review! This was good, an interesting read. Just a few nitpicks though: the black scenery Is this because it’s at night? If not, then ...

Hello, this is really good, the story line is compelling for us, and sustainable for you! I really enjoyed this, and hope to see more soon! *Crosses fingers* A few ...

Hello! I can definitely relate to this, there are grammar errors, but it's not a serious poem I suspect! I will list them anyways, but it won't rhyme if you ...

I honestly think this is fabulous! I think your writing style far surpasses your years in terms of maturity and vocabulary. You seem to have a natural flair for poetry, ...

Hello, and thank you for your review! Personally, I thought this poem was absolutely brilliant, the imagery you present is compelling, and rather beautiful. The rather chilling last line is ...

Hello, this is good, I don't usually read romantic fiction so I won't pretend to be an expert, but I thought this was well written, apart from the odd grammatical ...

Hello, thanks for the review, this is good, you have a great storyline here, sustainable and interesting. Minor problems I would point out though: We had a strong and unbreakable ...

I like it, it's a good start, which engages the readers attention, I'm a little worried about the amount of kids though! This could lead into many possibilities, allowing yours ...

I love this, it made me smile! I think it's a good laugh and I enjoyed it thoroughly! I love this bit For a student whose homework was dropped in ...