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Hello, I’m Roon! Anyways, this is a great poem, well written and has a very good flow. First I’ll do nitpicks though: All this time we danced around the truth, ...

Hello, Roon here! I like this, it’s interesting, different. Okay, I’ll go ahead with nitpicks now! It just suite him so well. Suited My steps were almost in a strait ...

Hello, nice to meet you, I’m Roon. I like this, it’s nice. There are a couple of things that need fixing, but apart from that the idea is original and ...

Hello, Roon here! Nice to meet you. Okay, I will start of with nitpicks to get them out of the way! I really like this by the way! Festival time. ...

Hello! I’m Roon, nice to meet you! Well, this is a really nice idea, I can’t fault you on that! As for nitpicking, lets see what I can find. A ...

Hello, Roon here! So this was good except for a couple of things. The rhyming seems very forced, it actually distracted me from the poems sombre mood. People don’t care ...

Hello! I’m surprised no one has reviewed this yet, it’s fantastic! It took me a while to find anything to nitpick, but here goes: Letter and phrases bring music I ...

Hello! *waves exuberantly* It’s your friendly neighbourhood Roon! Anyways, I’m just going to review this one as it’s the most recent, if you want the others reviewing just let me ...

Hello! Roon here, first off, I quite like this, I think it has potential. Couple of nitpicks to begin with: Claustrophobic nightmare I would say A claustrophobic nightmare, I think ...

Hello, I’m Roon! Okay, this was nicely written, but there are a couple of things I would change. I think that maybe this could be broken up into stanzas, because ...

Hello, Roon here! I really like this, I think it’s something we can all relate to! A few minor nitpicks though: “Oh! Why didn’t I shed that ugly mask? I ...

Like the person before me said, it needs padding out and it‘s kinda contradictory, also you spelt weather wrong. But a nice idea, if you work on it, it could ...

Hello, Roon here, I think this is a great piece, showing real talent on your part, did you get given a grade? Anyways, I liked the repetition of the sentiments ...

Hello, Roon here! I really liked this, you clearly portray a sense of loss, we can all relate to this. It must have been hard for you to write, your ...

Hello again, Roon here. Again I thought this chapter was a compelling read. You say that there is a reason she would go for a younger guy, so I will ...