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Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, the tenses fluctuate a lot in this piece. Perhaps because in my head it was playing as sort of flashback ...

Hey Aley! Thanks for the review! I agree that the structuring of sentences makes them a bit awkward, especially the fend line. I was personally not very satisfied by it ...

Hi Shaniac! Thanks for the review. I appreciate the stuff that you picked out and have made a few changes here and there based on that. I left some (in ...

Don't worry at all. Write freely and write for the sake of the story. Don't think about the readers while writing. -rohan

Thanks Kate! I'm glad you liked it.

Dil tudwao balak... fir rush niklega :P

Where's the fun in that :P

Hey Eros! Glad that you liked it. I wrote this piece a long time ago for a competition. I wanted to keep the story as eerie and open-ended as possible. ...

Didn't let me publish it without it though :/

Thanks Eros for the wonderful words! I am glad you liked it. You can read/review a couple of poetries that I have put on YWS earlier. -rohan

Ah yes! The sonnets... I feel stupid now not recognizing it at a glance. I guess differential equations do lower your spontaneity. Keep writing!

Hah! Didn't think you'll be offended! Adieu, my friend!

Hey! Thank you for your review. I was smiling throughout the time I was reading it. Now answering to your complaints: Rupert is his imagination, but that doesn't mean he ...

Hey! Thanks for the review. Yeah, I agree that "Perks of being a Wallflower" might have been running in my mind when I wrote this. Thus, tried the letter thing.

Thanks for the review! To answer your concerns, the characters Rupert and Natalie are indeed Ben's imagination. So is Nancy, the nurse. I wilfully mainatined the ambiguity so that the ...