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I really love this. I like the literary devices and in general just the imagery. I love the personification and the images you get from: "Death wandered these lonely ways, ...

I agree with Eimear, I really liked this poem, but I think it was mostly because it appealed to me as a writer. I think that you should make it ...

You know, although I agree with some of the other posters on the vagueness, I really liked the poem. I like how it was simple and short, and I think ...

I really loved this, I wish I could hear the music to it. And like other people, I really enjoyed the imagry. I think that the poetic quality to the ...

Wow, the idea is definitely there. Don't change anything about the actual words, but I agree with piepiemann22 about how there is very little imagery and poetic device. You have ...

I agree with Mad. The short lines work fairly well on this piece. Also, it isn't typically something I would be interested in, but it held my attention most of ...

I kinda agree with some of the other posters on this forum. The structure is a little odd. I think that this fragmentation that you did would work in some ...

Wow, if that's a true story, then I'm really sorry. I think that other then what the other people pointed out, this story was excellent. I disagree slightly with Heidigirl666 ...

First off, I'd say this was an interesting poem. It had a good concept and I feel like I understand what you're trying to convey to your readers, but I ...