rissymay

Woooaaah this is super good and makes so much sense to me which excites me because I get frustrated when I can't make sense of the analogies in poetry. Good ...

I like the idea of explaining more of the setup as the story picks up- I love books like that, so I'm glad you're planning to do that. A sudden ...

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Thanks! I like the idea of describing the narrator more, and I'll try to do that when I revise. I'm not sure how much I like the rhyme scheme myself. ...

Thanks! Yes, an under-appreciated person is the idea of this poem. I think I'll "put this poem away" for a little bit and try revising it sometime later.

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heyyyyy I read chapter two before i read this XD chapter 2 makes more sense now a few hints on why she's stealing jewelry would help to keep a little ...

very well done in every aspect! The character descriptions were en pointe! The way you casually slipped Archer's description into your writing... awesome. Your characters are different and distinct as

I had that once too... yeah it sucks

i saw this on the leaderboard ;D awesome poem! (is it okay that this is probably my favorite one from you?) it's just so clear, so easy to understand, but ...

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i tried to break up the stanzas, but when I published it it didn't work... :/ thanks