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Re: [DELETED]
Good evening Levs(: To be honest, sadness surrounds me at the time that I finish to read your poetry. You know? It has a sad ending of your grandpa, kinda ...
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Snickers
HI LIBERTY MY LOVES, I'M HERE TO CRITIQUE YOUR "SNICKERS" First of all, your title is very capturing and very yummy. You act like an endorcer of snickers huh. HAHA. ...
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: On The Spot
Hi Horison, I'm Riothe. Here's a quick critism about your piece. First your let's talk about your title.What about your title is? When I first read your title, it seems ...
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: revelation
Hi Baby faith Good morning (': I'm Riothe Selcouth, pleasure to read the one of your masterpieces.But, am going to critique it. Here, Faith I know, While you are writing ...
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 8.2: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
KEEP ON WRITING AND KEEP YOUR PEN'S UP OKAY? I like it. ugh —riothe selcouth 🍂
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: Dining Set
Hi Darling Chaser, Good morning (': I'm Riothe Selcouth, pleasure to read the one of your masterpieces.But, am going to critique it. Btw I really like poetry. Here, Let's talk ...
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: love, commitment
Hi Baby Olya, Good morning (': I'm Riothe Selcouth, pleasure to read the one of your masterpieces.But, am going to critique it. Here, Olya I know, While you are writing ...
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: The Note
Hi Rei, Good evening (: I'm Riothe Your poem has a deep meaning and full of metaphors. While I'm reading your poem, line by line, i felt something wrong, it'll ...
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 8.3: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl
Hi, good evening to my Baby DottieSnark💕 for my good beginning, i just want to introduce myself first I'm Riothe Selcouth call me Ri, or Riot lol. I'm here to ...
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: Howling Storm
Hiiii Phoenix, I'm Riothe Selcouth
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: Mirrored
Hi humpy dumpy Dariathegirlwholovespizza, I'm Riothe Selcouth,btw i like your name because i like pizza too. Okay, let's proceed. Ahm, Daria. At first paragraph of your novel there's a word ...
Sep 3, 2019 -
Re: Chapter One- Bella Carter
My little Star, Hi I'm Riothe. Ahmm, while am reading your novel my mind explores of what I've read so it means i relate about the story of the novel ...
Sep 3, 2019
