rhiasofia

It's definitely a bit different than my usual style, and I wasn't sold on it, which is why I posted it when I didn't have to use points, haha. Mostly, ...

Lovely and helpful review, as usual! I tweaked it a bit with your critiques in mind, and I definitely like it better. For your own curiosity: The cherries are these ...

Alright, as long as you like it, I like it ;). It's only cause I usually love your word choice so much, it made those two stand out!

Thanks! These are all really helpful, and I'll do some editing now.

Thanks! I used both of those suggestions, so hopefully it will sit a bit better. Don't worry, I love when people can fix my grammar even if it's just poetry, ...

S'okay, it happens

yes, it is meant to be there.

Yeah, inane is a word, it means stupid or foolish. Thanks!

Yes, that's exactly what I meant. It was supposed to represent me hardening and becoming like her. I thought that it would fit, since I said "reborn", and newborns bones ...

I'd have to be really creative, cause I honestly know nothing abaout said Saint XD. The words just came to me. But I would love to try it out. It'd ...

*shivers*

Thanks! I didn't originally plan on each stanza being three lines, but the first six lines happened to match with syllable length (7-6-3), and so I went with it to ...

Haha, no problem! It happens to the best of us ;)

hello, rhia here to review! There's two teachers at our school who're eccentric and nice There's should be there are for verb agreement Their the masters of Art, Their should ...

Of course! Sorry I didn't really focus on talking about the story, I don't write short stories so I try to avoid getting into it since I have no experience. ...