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Re: The Vally of the Blue Heart
The repetition of muse is very effective and it draws the reader in. From reading this it creates things quite visual in the readers head. It has made me think ...
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Re: Pin Your Regrets to the Earth
Only wings show the statues to be angels, their faces and arms missing; how will Jesus heal the lepers without hands? That is truly genius This is good, very good. ...
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Re: Vestiges
Vestiges These nights are alone, hiding beneath the floor in a midnight’s cobweb Very good line with only a monitor’s light, dreaming of successes and contemplating failures. It seems to ...
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Re: The Best Book Ever Read
In no order. Empress Orchid- Anchee Min Seriously one of the best books i have ever read. The book of lies- Brad Meltzer Intresting, but i would recomend. Raymond Chandler- ...
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Re: At World's End
I actually quite like it. I am the essence of darkness, but also of light. I am the giver of life, and the destroyer of worlds. I know love and ...
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Re: Dear Love:
Hello, This poem reminds of The laboratory poem, as i feel they have similar themes. This is quite a good poem, and you choice of language makes the poem more ...
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Re: Mirror Maze
I really really like this. Anyone can relate to it really because it seems to be about choices. ( unless i have got it totally wrong) Each side is opposite, ...
Jun 17, 2010
