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resfeber

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: there is a starman waiting in the sky for me

    Okay so literally this poem is AMAZING! I have never seen death shown in this kind of light before. This poem is so deep, but not overbearing. I absolutely loved ...

    Feb 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Growing Old

    This poem is amazing. I have never read something that is so relatable about an adolescent growing up into adulthood. I love how you kept asking the question "Are you ...

    Feb 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Heartbreak

    This is short but I can relate to it so much. I don't know much about Haikus (if I spelled it wrong sorry). The title completely explains the poem, or ...

    Feb 7, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hopeful lies

    This poem is short, but also very interesting. My suggestion is maybe to add a few more lines. overall this poem is very good. I can relate to it really ...

    Feb 7, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Perception

    Hey! I really do love this poem. I get a big sense of something good never lasts. I'm not sure if that is exactly what you intended on doing, but ...

    Feb 6, 2018


"Come quickly, I am drinking the stars!"
— Dom PĂ©rignon