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Thank you so much!! :)

Thank you!!!

Thank you very much!!!

Lol thank you very much! Your right, there should have been more. Maybe I could make the poem by having each stanza be a haiku :D

Thank you! Really! You got the whole point of this lol

Why thank you very much!!

yay thank you! Oh by the way, stabler and benson are from law and order svu, its my favorite show and this was a poem for english. Soooo, I wanted ...

Haha well sorry about that awkward reply i just sent you then. I just wanted to get the meaning across without writing everything down that i already wrote, wow i ...

ee gads!! Wow, I really did a terrible job at conveying a story of child abuse! It was supposed to be a boy cleaning off his dried blood from his ...

Wow, I did a terrible job at conveying a story of child abuse! It was supposed to be a boy cleaning off his dried blood from his bed, (you know, ...

why thank ya kindly for your review! This is actually an interesting take on the poem, its quite different than what it was supposed to mean, but I love that! ...

The ammonia scented dirt was supposed to be his bed and how it still smelled of the bleach. Thank ya for your review by the way!

Why thank ya, and yes the ending was rushed but it was all I could think of at the time, but I'll try to work on it! :)

Lol i put trigger warning because it had to to with a rape victim (hence defiled) but thanks for this :)

thank you! Haha I'll fix em!