remi

Your poem really described how many people (and girls) don't see the beauty that's within themselves and look at their special and beautiful quirks as ugliness. Your word choice definitely ...

What an interesting poem! It intrigued me from the very first line - "Nicked her knuckles one by one". Your flow, rhyme, and word choice is very excellent. Your descriptive ...

Hi! Remi over here to review. This poem is so relatable, holding the same questions that I ask myself on a constant basis. I love how every four lines ends ...

Woah, those two last lines... You took the term "star-crossed lovers" to a completely new level, and the title completely matches the story of the poem. The lines flow really ...

What a great poem! Your word choice and language are very enticing and draw the reader in. I suggest maybe using more punctuation (i.e. hyphens, commas, etc) to help the ...