rememberdecember

Well I really like this poem. And your usage of sensory detail was really good. I could feel like I was there with you. But towards the poem, I got ...

Awhhh:) I thought that poem was just so good. It really showed how all the emotions hidden within in the words. I also like the way you said how he ...

Heyy!:) Just wanted to say that I think this poem is really good and it almost took my breathe away...I always have trouble finding a good poem to read but ...

Awh this story is so sweet. I especially liked it when she was leadin up to tell him why she hadn't been in touch and I also loved th ending. ...

Wow that story just about took my breath away. I could definetly feel the emotion coming through it and overall I thought it was amazing:) It really is something that ...

Thanks...and it is a true story:)

overall i think its a good poem :)

hey:) i thought this poem was really good, you really captured all ur feelings and put it into a well thought out poem. i think you should make it longer.