reikann

To begin with, I love the atmosphere of the poem. It feels, like you say, yellow. It is a moment set aside in time, a snapshot of a moment that ...

Hehe. This is a simple little piece of free prose that I found quite amusing, in its own way. It sounds like a children's poem - something to be paired ...

I understand that this isn't a piece of literature as the sort that we think of, and therefore should perhaps be read as more of a thinkpiece or blog post, ...

To begin with, musical lyrics are always a challenge without their accompanying music, but we can look at this like a poem nevertheless. The nightmare feel of verses three and ...

Alright. There are some glaring issues with this work. Firstly, the rampart lack of capitalization and punctuation, liberal coating of grammar errors, and sporadic formatting makes it hard to read. ...

This has real potential to be something dramatic and genuine. The underlying story about your relationship with faith and your father's mental illness could be powerful with a little work. ...