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Thanks everyone for the reviews. Much appreciated. :) @Knightly: Pablo Neruda? I am not worthy. I am not worthy. :)) Thanks though. Haha. This was my first shot at "minimalist" ...

Thanks for your reviews. Much appreciated :) The "foreign" (how ironic on my part. haha) words actually were italicized in the original copy, but when I pasted it on my ...

Thanks everyone :) @SoggyPoptart: Thanks, but I think capitals and punctuation marks are a matter of preference in contemporary poetry. xD @alohajuice: A great writer once told me, "Poetry is ...

Hi Coral! You're right about the coast thing. Haha. It's probably like that because when I wrote this way back in July, I had a local audience in mind so ...

@Blue Africa: I guess you're right about the in-on confusion. And about the rhythm... I think I caught a dream while laying in the grass, a smile from the dandelions ...