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Hey there :) I'm going to be critiqueing your piece today - I quote your piece and change and add comments within it in bold . .3. Dom was walking ...

Hey there :) I'm going to be doing you a review this morning. I hope you don't mind, but I do them in bold within a quote of your story. ...

Hey there, I'm going to be doing you a critique this morning. I hope you don't mind, but I do mine in bold in a quote. This makes it more ...

Hey there, I do my critique in bold in the quote for a more thorough look through stories etc. I woke to the the dead silence of the on-going night.

Hello there, I thought I would send you my review on this piece, but to be honest, I found almost NO mistakes. So I just thought I would send you ...

Hi, this is my Critique (it is in bold - so you can read it all through with my recommendations easily). Enjoy :) I didn't like clingy girls. I didn't ...

My critique is in Bold . Me. I am being thrown to the mirrors. I am--. I gasped. I am being pulled back to reality. I glanced up at Nora ...

Ok, so I thought I would do a critique on this... Although, I found nearly NO mistakes... (My critique is in BOLD within the quote.) The night closed down on ...