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Re: An Earthbound Lament
Hi! Recklessandwild here, leaving a quick review. First, I really enjoyed this! I loved the language you used - it really contributed to the entire majestic-type feel I got from ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Eager Sacrifice
Hi! I'm recklessandwild here, leaving a quick review. Interesting. I automatically thought of The Hunger Games, particularly through the word "Uprising" and the idea of the Capitol citizens sitting ar
May 10, 2016 -
Re: I love you
Hi! I'm recklessandwild. Nice to meet you. First, I'd like to point out something about grammar. You're missing some periods and commas, so I'd suggest checking over your work multiple ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: Long Lost
Hey! First, I really enjoyed this piece of prose. You have a real talent for setting the scene and mood in a few words. Yet, because of the few words, ...
May 10, 2016
