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Re: All I need is my not so American Dream
Thank you so much! This was a first draft based on what I studied in AP United States History, so just thanks for the corrections. I'm glad it was able ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: All I need is my not so American Dream
Thank you so much!! The first part refers to my friends wanting to go Ive in busy cities and I really don't want that. The reason it's called "my not ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Terrorism has no religion
Thank you so much!! I'm really happy you like my writing
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Terrorism has no religion
Thank you sooo much!! Your corrections are so useful. I'll definitely edit my essay. Thank you for liking it!!
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Terrorism has no religion
Thank you so much for the advice. So over easter people in the city of Lahore(both christian and muslim) gathered in a big park to celebrate Easter and it was ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Terrorism has no religion
Thank you soo much! It really means a lot. I'll change the punctuation.
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Terrorism has no religion
Thank you so much!Means a lot, I hope I can make an impact, however small it may be.
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Barbie Dolls
Hiii I wanted to start off by saying you did an amazing job while tackling such an important issue. I really like it when you mention the corsets in light ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Once you let me go
Thank you so much! i'm really glad you enjoyed reading my story! It means so much to me and I'll definitely work on that.
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Once you let me go
Thank you so much, it means a lot! I will definitely look into that and try to show more rather than tell.
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