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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    Calling what I do as style is a misnomer, at best there's an enigmatic voice -but without discipline or form, it's eh. That's why I appreciate the feedback from people ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    It wasn't intentional at the moment of writing. I sat in the that gray prius, she had driven the way to therapy, and I was processing the conversation from the ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    I can see the disruption in format and how I should have probably remained mindful to keeping it consistent for no other purpose than peace of mind. Lack of punctuation ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    I can see where the visual wasn't necessary. Would it be awful to say that I'm not accustomed to the change in format for new works -my breaks weren't showing ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    I suggest you come off your high horse with higher vocabulary to realize not all works utilize such things. Prime example of a best seller -Harry Potter, she had terrible ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why the nice guy?

    there are more than two genders. the binary is a lie. check yourself annabellekirkland, there are men who are assigned female at birth -transgender men. i won't bother with the ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)

    Thanks. I chose familiar because we are all creatures of habit and that's comforting. Familiarity is created though repetition which yields memories. I chose it as a transition into the ...

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)

    Thanks, I felt the language was simple. Fascinating how I never tire to hear what people viewed the dynamic and people to be in this piece. There is indeed emotional ...

    Feb 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)

    That's cool, I never looked at it that way -the protagonist being black. Fascinating point of view there, it really gives the story a different feel. You're not wrong because ...

    Feb 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)

    Solid, thanks for the review. I felt uncomfortable writing this piece because unlike the other Pretty Ladies anthology -this one doesn't have all the details of their romance and the ...

    Feb 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Call Girl [1]

    Sure, we can go with backhanded compliment.

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Call Girl [1]

    I never forget, watch out AJ. Your piece has inspired me to return back to reviewing and soon I'll be srs bsns about my reviewing.

    Sep 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: That Girl You Call Slut

    What is with "completely shameful"? Let me reiterate, there is /nothing/ shameful about enjoying sex regardless of gender.

    Jul 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: That Girl You Call Slut

    No girl is a "slut" because there is nothing shameful about enjoying sex regardless of gender.

    Jul 21, 2013
  • Other » Health, Narrative Re: born this way

    i wrote personal story to dissuade harsh reviews. i typically can handle such a thing, but this piece is no ordinary story for me. the actual condition or conditions are ...

    Mar 26, 2013


I will not condemn you for what you did yesterday, if you do it right today.
— Sheldon S. Maye