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Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships
Calling what I do as style is a misnomer, at best there's an enigmatic voice -but without discipline or form, it's eh. That's why I appreciate the feedback from people ...
Jul 30, 2016 -
Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships
It wasn't intentional at the moment of writing. I sat in the that gray prius, she had driven the way to therapy, and I was processing the conversation from the ...
Jul 30, 2016 -
Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships
I can see the disruption in format and how I should have probably remained mindful to keeping it consistent for no other purpose than peace of mind. Lack of punctuation ...
Jul 29, 2016 -
Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships
I can see where the visual wasn't necessary. Would it be awful to say that I'm not accustomed to the change in format for new works -my breaks weren't showing ...
Jul 29, 2016 -
Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships
I suggest you come off your high horse with higher vocabulary to realize not all works utilize such things. Prime example of a best seller -Harry Potter, she had terrible ...
Jul 29, 2016 -
Re: Why the nice guy?
there are more than two genders. the binary is a lie. check yourself annabellekirkland, there are men who are assigned female at birth -transgender men. i won't bother with the ...
Jul 12, 2016 -
Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)
Thanks. I chose familiar because we are all creatures of habit and that's comforting. Familiarity is created though repetition which yields memories. I chose it as a transition into the ...
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)
Thanks, I felt the language was simple. Fascinating how I never tire to hear what people viewed the dynamic and people to be in this piece. There is indeed emotional ...
Feb 13, 2015 -
Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)
That's cool, I never looked at it that way -the protagonist being black. Fascinating point of view there, it really gives the story a different feel. You're not wrong because ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)
Solid, thanks for the review. I felt uncomfortable writing this piece because unlike the other Pretty Ladies anthology -this one doesn't have all the details of their romance and the ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: The Call Girl [1]
Sure, we can go with backhanded compliment.
Sep 28, 2013 -
Re: The Call Girl [1]
I never forget, watch out AJ. Your piece has inspired me to return back to reviewing and soon I'll be srs bsns about my reviewing.
Sep 27, 2013 -
Re: That Girl You Call Slut
What is with "completely shameful"? Let me reiterate, there is /nothing/ shameful about enjoying sex regardless of gender.
Jul 27, 2013 -
Re: That Girl You Call Slut
No girl is a "slut" because there is nothing shameful about enjoying sex regardless of gender.
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: born this way
i wrote personal story to dissuade harsh reviews. i typically can handle such a thing, but this piece is no ordinary story for me. the actual condition or conditions are ...
Mar 26, 2013
