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Re: My moon
This is a very beautiful poem. I can relate to it alot. It's very realistic. About love, right? I like your comparison with the moon and stars and that you ...
Nov 10, 2019 -
Re: A realization
"The beauty took my breath away" Just like this song. It is so perfect, it describes all the real feelings, when you are sick and the snow falls down... And ...
Dec 29, 2018 -
Re: Asleep, or Dead?
Hi! This poem is so wondrous and also very sad... It's kind of worrying but very amusing. I feel like this quite often, i feel, that nobody actually likes me ...
Dec 27, 2018 -
Re: Our Souls in Fading Light
Luke, this is very good and your comparisons are amazing. The story would be even better, if we would know the characters, so when anyone dies it would actually hurt ...
Dec 27, 2018 -
Re: I'll make Writers out of you
This is soooooo good! It has a nice beat to it and you could sing it(or is it meant to be sang :)) The part about Twilight almost killed me ...
Dec 26, 2018 -
Re: Anxiety
I feel like that all the time... But i think it's normal, because it's probably the way that some people look at you and they tell you something and you ...
Dec 26, 2018 -
Re: Shades of Silence
Wowwwww This was so deep. It really got me thinking... Silence isn't the same thing as peace. Inactivity means, that you can be quiet. You may not be doing anything, ...
Dec 25, 2018
