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What does adding layers mean?

I just changed the first chapter as you asked. Just check and say if that is fine. :D

Thank You So Much :D

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These :- looming, but a clay bowl waiting Air and whispers

Thanks! I wrote this poem very before so yeah there are a lot of mistakes.

Yup thanks I really needed opinions cause i was not able to slow down the story. I think i did mention how Emma got the note "her eyes flashed towards ...

Yup thanks I really needed opinions cause i was not able to slow down the story. I think i did mention how Emma got the note "her eyes flashed towards ...

Great! Keep Going!

Okay :D

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Thnk U sOO mUCh

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank You Sooooooooooooooooooo Much, Abyss means deep ,Abhor means hatred and saccharine means sweet

Thank You So Much, I did not rhyme the poem cause sometimes non rhyming suits too.

No! I do not hate the rain. I meant during nights when we are in a deep sleep the rain wakes us up and our sweet dreams are broken. 'And ...