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Thanks bugbug368!! :) It means a lot!

Thanks Lupis! I see exactly what you mean! It helps a lot, thanks again! :)

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx!! Thanks so much for the review! I completely agree! :)

Thanks yet again, CarbonCore! The review helped a ton! :)

Thanks for the review CarbonCore! I'll make sure to take your advice and revise some parts of this chapter. Thanks again! :)

You know, I've always felt that there wasn't something quite right with that sentence. Thanks for pointing it out! :) I'll definitely change it to something that fits better. Yes, ...

Thanks, Summerlovee! No, you did help! Just letting me know that you like it helps a lot! :) I hope you get the chance to read the next chapter when ...

Xiahou Zay, thanks again! Your review helped out a lot! I'll make sure to edit part two as soon as I can! I should be posting chapter two sometime soon, ...

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx! Thanks for the review! I see exactly what you mean; thanks for pointing those mistakes out. What was perfect? It almost sounded like she was being sarcastic. In ...

Thanks so much for the review! I've overlooked this chapter so much so it's really helpful when you point out the flaws! I'll yet again apply these when I edit ...

Thanks Xiahou Zay! I get what you're saying about telling everyone what it's about, but I wanted it to be a bit mysterious in the beginning. You understand what it's ...

Thanks so much, Shadowhunter14! I will definitely apply your corrections! :) Glad you liked it; it means a lot!

Haha, I absolutely adored this poem! I was actually laughing by the end. :) I loved your rhythm as well as the story. Keep writing! This was fantastic! :)

This is really good! I think you should try writing more lyrics! :) I'd like to read more of your's.

Wow. You really know how to give a reader a metal image. I felt like I was sitting right there next to Macey. Great story so far! :) I can't ...