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This was so incredibly epic that I don't even know what to say. I absolutely adore the idea of it and how much you took advantage of the comic potential. ...

Thanks so much for the review, Jai! I really appreciate you taking the time to look over my mistakes (which, believe me, I know there are many in this novel)! ...

Thanks, Jesskare! I really appreciate that you took the time to review this! :) Yes, I'll definitely keep that in mind when I start my second draft. Thanks again! Rachael ...

Thanks yet again, Psudiname! Yes, I often have trouble trying to find the perfect balance between having just enough details on the important things, while not boring the readers with ...

Thanks so much for the review, Psudiname! I appreciate the time and effort you put into sharing your opinions! I'll definitely keep in mind your helpful little hints on what ...

Dreamwalker, you're at it once again! I cannot even explain how much you've helped me out on this piece, but also how you've helped me as a writer. I will ...

Thank you so much, Dreamwalker! Your reviews are some of the best! And I cannot explain how much they made me smile! :D I'm so glad that you took the ...

Thanks, Dreamwalker! I completely agree, and will definitely keep your review in mind when I start on my second draft! You've helped me out so much! :D Thanks again! Rachael

Thanks, Gloss1! I'm flattered! :D Rachael

Thanks so much, Jojo! I'll definitely make sure to look over your nitpicks when I come back and start my second draft! :D You've helped me out so much! Thanks ...

Thanks, Silentpages! Yes, I have noticed that I switch back and forth between tenses, which I am definitely going to fix once I edit this piece! Thanks so much for ...

Thanks, Oceanwriter99! I appreciate the review. I'll make sure to go back and edit this (it's a first draft :)) when I can. Yes, I know the title sucks (although ...

Thanks, Lupis! The review is much appreciated! I'll definitely keep those things in mind when I go back and edit this! Thanks so much! :)

Awesome review, blacksheep! Thanks so much for all of your help! I've always had a problem with commas, so the tips and links are really helpful! I'll make sure to ...

Thanks Bugbug! :) I'll be sure to change the format of my little comment! Thanks for pointing that out!