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Hiya Pinkie~~~! Your glasses are snazzy. ;D I'm sure the event you're talking about is that transition scene that everyone hates. xD Haha. But, there's only one other scene like ...

Holy cow, lengthy review. But I like it. ;D I just have to open a new tab to reply though. xD Haha. Thank you for taking the time to be ...

Woah, I just saw this. Sorry for the late reply. ^_^ The scene with her father will be reflected on quite a lot later on, so I'll definitely mention some ...

I actually do write Historical Fiction. xD And I've never written anything placed in the Middle Ages, but I've read works from that era that I can assure you this ...

Lmao. That's pretty much where I got the beginning idea of this story. Through a complaint with friends about how many times that's happened. xD I'm glad you like Duane. ...

'Ello, Noelle. ^_^ I'm glad you're enjoying the character and that is some premise of interest here. Yeah, the orphan thing is over-done, so I'm definitely depending on my characters/writing ...

Thank you for catching the typo and advice. :D As for that line. Maybe it's something that further chapters will explain? Basically, her father picks her up everyday from school ...

So glad to find someone sympathize with Duane, especially this early on. Lmao, unfortunately I think you'll be thwacking her a lot with your 'glitter rod'. xD Thanks for catching ...

This entire story is about kind of explaining why she hates them. I mean, in a way it's not, but you'll definitely learn a bit of her past and definitely ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you for such an amazing comment.

It's the past. It's labeled 'historical fiction'. ^_^ And 'punch' is correct. It was introduced around the 1700s. But I agree, it is description heavy. This is very common in ...

Lol. I kinda figured since it's dated from 2007. But if you do in the future, hopefully this helps...maybe...no.... x'D

Wow, then this is rally good for it not being your first language. ^__^bb Wish I wrote that well in French and Spanish. X'D

Ah, yes. It reads much better now. Loved the line "...gossip spreads like...a flame starter." :D

I understood that past the grapefruit incident. But prior to that, is that also the case? Because then her handing herself a grapefruit confuses me. O.o