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Oh i love this! The way you dercibe your emotions is great. Also im glad you didnt try to make this rhyme, like alot of people try to do, because ...

I think this is really interesting.. You dont punctuate any of your conjuctions, which you really should do because it seems sloppy and childish when it's ive, rather than I've, ...

Hahahah i reallly like this post. it made me laugh. but what exactly do you mean by appt? just curious. you could have started it better but overall great piece ...

Hey so I really enjoyed the story great job. i just ave some questions. Does Jacks father kill Chris Chambers, Gordie LaChance, Vern Tessio, and Teddy DuChamp as well as ...

bahahahha i loved it. dont real;y have good critisizim, cuz your a much better writer than me, but i just wanted to let you know that it made my day ...

its very interesting. i enjoy the whole theme of anit_conformitism. Their Lord merciful and never once did I think he'd smite, "definitely not". what exactly do you mean by def ...

haha i loved it! few things. i think mabey if you somehow had the signs in there, but very unoticable, it would be cool. also you misplelt feel (fell) in ...