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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Enemies in crime. Chapter two 3.4

    Hi! raindrops here to leave another review. So the first noticeable thing here is that the division of paragraphs weren't fixed. But that's okay, I'm not here for that. Though, ...

    Jan 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Enemies in Crime. Chapter two 2.4

    Hi! raindrops here to leave a review. Someone called her name. A burst of wind hit her cheek. She blinked, she heard her name again. I can see that you ...

    Jan 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose - Ch.I: Unforgotten Murder 2

    Hi! raindrops here to leave another review. So let's get right to it. Sehlingen was hidden away. I see that you started this like the previous chapter, and that does ...

    Jan 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose - Ch.I: Unforgotten Murder 1

    Hi! raindrops here to drop some review. First off, I'm a sucker for murder mystery stories so I clicked your story the moment I saw the title, and I was ...

    Jan 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: A Perfect Moment-A Paragraph (Or, Vision Of A Fool, In Infatuation)

    Hi! raindrops here. I think I'm going to binge your works and leave a few comments and reviews. So far, I've pretty much liked all works of yours I've read. ...

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Other » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Namesake Tree In Nutana Park

    Hello again! raindrops here to drop another review on your work. I must say I really like these short stories of yours. Now for the review. the black desert of ...

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Limited - Short story set in a twisted future America.

    I simply wish this to be featured, sincerely. Hi! raindrops here to leave a review. My review types usually focuses on English and grammar but your writing is superb, I ...

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Eye Of The Storm

    Hi! raindrops here to drop a review and few suggestions. When I first met you I was so struck by your simplicity and by your sweetness of speech and manner ...

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: A new year's murder

    Hi! raindrops here to drop a quick review. The clock struck twelve and...Bang! Now, that's some pretty slick start, I loved it. It was a like an introductory scene from ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Hi! raindrops is here for some review. First off I just want to praise your story title, It is very catchy, and will surely attract diverse readers. Okay, so for ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The mystery of love

    Hi, raindrops is here for a quick review! First off, I want to appreciate you writing this piece and the consequence of me reading it. I just finished writing a ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Spiritual Re: Stones Of Babel - Prologue

    Interesting, but I haven't really read any historical fiction related to the bible, so this is a first for me. I'm also clueless as to what I should expect of ...

    Jan 18, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ruins of Irnslo

    Wow! This is good, I'd love to know more about Elena's background, and you must have written other stories, the way this work is written is superb. I can easily ...

    Oct 24, 2020


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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