raindrops

Hi, raindrops again, here to leave a review! First, I felt so sad for Ash:(. You did a great job explaining/portraying the mindlessness she's in. I particularly felt the numbness, ...

Okayyyyy. Hi, I'm raindrops and I'm here to leave a review! This is a long read, after reading three chapters in, I definitely see that you can write a lottt. ...

Hi! raindrops again, here to leave a review. And I want to say OOOOH, now this chapter has a wayyyy better construction than the last. You started with the main ...

Hi! raindrops here to leave a review. First, the ending is pretty intriguing, it wraps up the first chapter well. It's a really good hook for readers to continue with ...

But the man needed love too, craved for her attention too. He wished the girl would see him as much as he sees the boy. For the man is as ...

Hi! First of all, this is an amazing read. I'm not really here to give a constructive review, just wanted to pop to tell how I like your writing style/concept ...

Hi! raindrops here for a review. Your introductory paragraph is interesting, and we both know that's good because that's how you attract readers - aside from the title. I noticed ...

Hi! raindrops here to leave a review. I see that you're new here in YWS, so I welcome you with hopes you continue writing. So what I like about this ...

Hi! So raindrops here decided to read your first chapters after reviewing your latest ones. So after reading three chapters of your works, I've grasped an idea on how you ...

Heya! raindrops is back again for a review. What I liked the most in this chapter is that, although short its wholesome. I don' think it's lacking. Others tend to ...

Hi! raindrops here for a review. So I didn't read the first two chapters, but I like how nevertheless, I don't feel like I am lost by your way of ...

Hi there! I'm raindrops and here to drop a review, hope you'll like it. What I liked about this is that you can keep on writing dialogues and transition them ...

Hi! raindrops is back again. Then I shall dive right to it. I used to say I strongly believed, argued and passionately fought for, the idea that being alone, single, ...

Hallooo! So for the day, this'll be raindrops last review of your chapters. Hoping to see more soon. Exiting out a couple of times. Zillah studied the tread marks versus ...

Hellooooo!!! raindrops is dropping here yet again. So this time, I do not think that this is unedited. You intended for the paragraphs to be edited this way. However, they ...