rainbowcabbit

Ah....I see. America says math, but if maths is normal that's ok.

Thanks :D But Ky is not a dog. He's a made-up creature that is mostly cat-like. I'll get to his description later.

Thanks :D

Thank you :)

I'm not even done yet!

Beautiful, beautiful poem. I love the imagery you used to describe the emotions. I can just see you clutching them in your arms just like dying animals, you want to ...

Pretty good for a ten-year-old! XD During that period of life I dreaded writing, and probably couldn't write well at all. Good job! It'd be fun to see your other ...

Thank you :D Grandpa meant to bring Ky with. I am so glad you liked it.

Oh, and yeah, if someone told me that my world was falling apart I'd send them to a mental hospital, but Sunnyside(Cynthia's world, or half of it ;)) is a ...

Thank you :)

I'm so glad you liked it! :D I should probably go more into detail about HOW it's falling apart. I'm sure that'll be revealed later in the story.

I you're nine? Sorry for the harsh review. ;nwn if you need any help with using bigger words you can ask. But it's a pretty good story.

Thanks for your help. I put it in second person just to be different. I'm sorry for the confusion, but he says "Please? Anybody?" just like Cynthia was thinking. The ...

I really love this poem! I can totally see the girl, like the sun, once elated, but now covered by the darkness of silence. I was only a bit confused ...